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Bloodstains On My Hands

March 8, 2010
By justbreathe.... BRONZE, N/a, South Carolina
justbreathe.... BRONZE, N/a, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how bad things get, there is always something that you don\'t know about just yet.

I laid on the blanket writing, just sprawling words across the page. I wasn’t even registering what I was writing. My thoughts were elsewhere. In my mind, I was back there at the house, the night my life became a living hell. I couldn‘t see the open field all around me, couldn‘t hear the horse grazing just a few yards away, couldn‘t feel the soft September breeze brushing my hair. All I could see was darkness, all I could hear was his voice screaming my name.
Suddenly I was aware of where I was again, what I was doing. I was back in the present, away from my memories of the night my life became a living hell. I looked down at my journal and read what was written there.
"On July 23,2009 I watched my father die because of a choice I made."

The author's comments:
The start of a great story hopefully. Comment if you have any ideas. Please!!

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This article has 2 comments.

E.B.D BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 11:55 am
E.B.D BRONZE, Vero Beach, Florida
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You should continue! I really want to know what happened :)

on Mar. 19 2010 at 10:40 pm
taradactle95 BRONZE, Boynton Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
laugh you heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
life's too short to be
living with regrets

I really like it keep going!