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No Longer My Romeo

December 12, 2009
By Tessabree BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
Tessabree BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
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When you left…you left me. Your face seemed to disappear out of pictures. There’s nothing left for your poisoned tong to say. You knew the second you left that pain would be all I have. So here is my letter to you, the one that says goodbye. You are no longer my Romeo. Your love has forsaken you. And my eye for you turned black. Although you’re gone I still feel your breath and hear your heartbeat, which I used to once lay my head upon. But I am here now to say I will no longer feel emptiness. You will no longer burn me with your unforgiving silence. I will no longer take your abuse! Your clothes I will burn as the smoke drifts out the chimney so will my remembrance of you. Yet you feel no pain you’re murderous and devilish. You knew what the world would do to me the minute you left. I still hear faint whispers that lead me to believe your still out there. One day a dagger of a soulless lover will strike me and as I go I will say to you no more; showing that my heart and soul has left to find a better place. So I say goodbye my once Romeo. Those words shall no longer linger on my tong.

The author's comments:
I have always had a passion for writting. I was just sitting down as i grabbed a peice of paper. Nothing special gave me insparation.

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its_me GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2010 at 4:30 pm
its_me GOLD, San Mateo, California
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i like how empowering this is! would you mind giving my feedback on my work? I'd really appreciate it!

on Jan. 10 2010 at 11:03 pm
kimmycakes GOLD, Monrovia, California
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Favorite Quote:
"never let love bring u down" also "and so the lion fell in love with the lamb"

dayam!! oh sorry !! lol well i really feel what u r saying i feel the same way...i write a lot i just pick up pen or pencil paper n i just write everyday...basically about what u just wrote u r really good!!!

Ella said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 7:18 pm
the mispelled word is spelled t-o-n-g-u-e

on Jan. 8 2010 at 3:42 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

ha i liked this. once i started reading, i couldnt stop. gr8 job

on Jan. 8 2010 at 3:25 pm
i_love_pancakes SILVER, Lutz, Florida
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*opens mouths but nothing can come out*

on Jan. 7 2010 at 3:02 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore

See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

It's like you stole the words from my mouth.

on Jan. 6 2010 at 4:08 pm
kodyz_angel PLATINUM, Onsted, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
if happiness seems more like a fantasy than a reality its because the tears are blinding you from the light that is trying to shine through

this is pretty kewl. but u do realize u spelled tounge wrong? u spelled tong.

KerAnn BRONZE said...
on Jan. 6 2010 at 3:35 pm
KerAnn BRONZE, Stanton, Michigan
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I enjoyed this.