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into the darkness

November 13, 2008
By Anonymous

U look into the shaddows and outta the darkness comes
the wolf the one that you were dreaming of the night before
you couldnt believe your eyes it was had wigs at
least 8 feet in length each the piercing red eye looked at you
eagerly as if it was waiting for a scream or move for self-
defence. but you had remembered in your dream that you
attacked it and you were carried away and eaten so you did
the opposite and stood and looked at the great wolf. you are in fear
of the wolf you hope that it dosent smell it in you. the wolf
starts to speak. it said, "I am a peaceful creature i've sent you
a warning in your dreams last night you did the right thing i
wouldnt have hurt you anyway. we need your help" your
amazed and look at the wolf curiously and then you ask,
"what do you mean we? where who what how huh?!?!" it
says, "we as in my home in japan its through a portal it leads
to where we all are and theres demons destroying our warriors
and we are loseing our lives and the battle you are the only
one to save us all of our lives are..." "let me guess..."you say
interupting "my hands right...?" it says with a serious yet
playful look on the face, "yes, have i told you that already or
something?" " but i've seen plenty of movies like
this and the one needed always wins in the last minute." "this
may not be that way those movies are fake.""really i never
knew" you say sarcasticly "just come with me." the wolf
says.......He sawweps you off your feet you begin to float off
of the ground looking down to see your house turn to a little
black dot with yellow lights in the darkness. you look up the
moon is so big compared to how you used to see it.the ride
starts to take hours you fall asleep. when you wake up and the
day is so bright its hard to keep your eyes open you fineally
get completely woken up you look around you see the wolf
and many others around you, you rub your eyes and their
gone exept for yours you ask where you are he says, "don't
you remember this place?" you remember the dream..."yes,
yes i do remember it here this is where you were talking about
before" then you say "but last night, i thought i was just

The author's comments:
this is a dream i had or atleast i thought that i did

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on May. 6 2013 at 3:23 pm
Miniterror GOLD, Yuma, Arizona
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"For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believes in Him should not perish but have everlasting life." John 3:16

I had to read everything twice to understand it. You really need to focus on grammar and punctuation. The story itself has some potential, just review and revise your work.

on Mar. 5 2013 at 11:03 pm
PuppyLove16 BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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"People were created to be loved. Things were created to be used. The reason why the world is in chaos is because things are being loved and people are being used."

The idea is there, it really sparked my intrest :) Next time, when you write something, make sure you edit, edit edit! (And don't forget grammar!) Keep trying though!!! You're obviously really creative, atleast subconciously!