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The Adventures Of The Dragon Of Light

January 6, 2009
By Anonymous

"It was a dark and stormy night, his mother ran into the cave. She is about to have her baby but she was pursued by people, people on do wish her destroyed. She looked around there was no one to help her, or so she thought. All of a sudden a light shined down from nowhere she looked up and saw the baby's father. He picked her up in his arms and flew away." " And then what happened?" Asked Miller? " hold on I'm getting their child" said Ruth. " and then it's over no one knows what happens after that." " Why not the story was just getting good" cried Miller! " because child when he flew off he blinded everyone so no one could see where he went" said Ruth " and now child it's time for you to go to bed."
But neither one of them new the child the mother was carrying was headed this way."

The author's comments:
I'm starting to write a new book and I need constructive criticism.

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