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Riding On MAG

March 5, 2008
By wanderer23 PLATINUM, Watertown, Massachusetts
wanderer23 PLATINUM, Watertown, Massachusetts
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Breathe in, breathe out
on the rhythm, the beat
Ignore the pain,
the constant ache
Let yourself
fly, bounce, gallop
Moving forward
is all that matters
Leave the past behind
and move on

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on May. 26 2010 at 7:35 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

I loved the style... it almost felt like I was on a galloping horse while I was reading it, because of how you placed the beats. :)

nicki said...
on Jan. 6 2009 at 12:15 am
I like the message behind the poem.

Cetacean said...
on Oct. 9 2008 at 11:00 pm
"Ignore the pain". Well said.

bballchic said...
on Aug. 14 2008 at 2:25 am
I really liked the style of poem created. You really spoke from your heart.