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Unexpected Love

December 30, 2010
By fictionwriter96, Tacurong City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe in Everything Because Everything's Reachable"

Justin's POV

At last, my tour finally gone to its end. Well, at least for now. I was so excited to see my friends and family.

"Justin." I heard my mom said. I faced her, looking the same as always. Her hair was in its natural straight and wavy, brown color. She was still young, a little wrinkles you can see. She was smiling, guess she was excited as I am.

"Yes mom?"

"Have you packed your things yet?"

"Do I have too?" I asked.

"Honey in case you don't want to wear any clothes when you meet them, then you can. It's in your hands." I rolled my eyes.

"Fine. Fine. Packing my things now." I said as I went to my room. I plopped in my bed, not wanting to packed my things at the moment, cause I'm that lazy.

I stared at the white ceiling above me, thinking what does everybody's gonna look like. I haven't seen them in months actually.

I missed them. Well there's this one particular girl that I miss so much.

"Justin?" My mom said as she knocked at my door, which shocked me a bit. I stood up and went at my door to opened it.

"Again mom?" I said annoyed.

"Well sweetie you have a visitor."



"Oh." We both went downstairs. There I saw my girlfriend, Selena, looking all so beautiful and smiley.

I came towards her and hugged her tightly.

"What's up babe?" I said as we both headed towards the living room.

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This book has 4 comments.

on Dec. 11 2018 at 12:02 pm
RenesmeeRenee BRONZE, Sa, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Norman Bates: You know what I think? I think that we’re all in our private traps, clamped in them, and none of us can ever get out. We scratch and we claw, but only at the air, only at each other, and for all of it, we never budge an inch.
Marion Crane: Sometimes, we deliberately step into those traps.
-Psycho (1960)

@JoPepper bro this hasn't been updated since 2010. I don't think it's going anywhere lol.

on Oct. 19 2011 at 7:19 pm
RachaelSt BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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its okay, kinda weird! 


on Aug. 25 2011 at 7:37 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

personally I think this story should involve me lol jk :D but its cute

on Jun. 23 2011 at 12:56 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

Personally I think you should've added some more chapters.  At least a second chapter that got into a plot.  However the idea sounds very interesting.  I hope I made sense!  Keep writing!!! :)