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My identity

April 9, 2009
By Jenigreen SILVER, Mosinee, Wisconsin
Jenigreen SILVER, Mosinee, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

When I see you cry I feel the pain inside me When I see you hide I feel the emptiness When I see you try to fit in I feel the different personalities you have in you When I look into the mirror I see I realize I am really you

The author's comments:
I am in foster care

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on Apr. 29 2009 at 11:53 pm
_TruStr_ PLATINUM, Muskegon, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
It's better to keep your mouth shut and give the impression that you're stupid than to open it and remove all doubt- Mark twain

Oh wow. Besides the few errors of lack of spacing, it was great.

I actually think the lack oif words and brief text made it intriguing; the ability to say so much in such a short way. ^__^