Spinning | Teen Ink


April 24, 2009
By madegclover6 SILVER, Van Nuys, California
madegclover6 SILVER, Van Nuys, California
6 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
idk i have alot

broken glass,

a fatal crash,

everyones there,

totally aware,

i'm spinning,

is this a new beginning,

no one hears me,

they don't see,

I'm not dead, or am I?

I see a light,

I put up a fight,

but I think it's my time to go,


I don't want to leave,

I have things to achieve,

but i'm not winning,

i'm just spinning,

So i go into the unwanted light,

and stop my hopeless fight.

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Seth1 BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2009 at 9:14 pm
Seth1 BRONZE, Republic, Missouri
3 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't really have any.

wow this is good

so many rimes and there not put into some childish form!

this is awesome!

on May. 10 2009 at 5:29 pm
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
44 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thus is life, live it, or die trying!

Wow, that left me breathless.