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Blood Rose

September 14, 2020
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."


A rose,

red as the wyne of the heart,
the staple of lyfe,
the symbol of pain,
Stood alone lyke we all do,
But surrounded by daisys and daffodils,
Standing out,
Dyvyded by
Many thyngs,
Variables
Lyke science,
We are roses,
Are experiments,
When gyven thys talent or
That defect,
What happens,
Loneliness seeps in, lyke that
Poor rose,
Blood rose,
Rose alone,
Stays alone,
Never wonders,
If it isnt
The only Blood Rose


The author's comments:

sorry its a byt mocking. i deliberitly made it very melodraatic to stryke a sharp comparison


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on Sep. 14 at 11:37 am
bridgettes BRONZE, Rolla, Missouri
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love this!

on Sep. 3 at 9:24 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

yayyy!!!!

on Sep. 2 at 1:56 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

there you go. it should work. bookmark the tab bc that link wont work for long.

on Sep. 2 at 1:55 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

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on Sep. 2 at 1:44 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

im not the owner, i cant admit you.
but i can copy the doc and give you acess.

on Aug. 31 at 4:59 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

im trying to send the link.
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on Aug. 31 at 4:46 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

yeah, ill get it.

on Aug. 31 at 4:46 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

OH MY GOSH YOURE ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Aug. 5 at 10:32 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

thx!!!

on Aug. 3 at 2:11 pm
CrazyCatLady6 GOLD, New Radnor, Other
16 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There would be no shadows if the sun were not shining"

@WolfGurl I totally agree, I rlly like the 'y' instead of the 'i' it makes it more elegant and poetic

on Jun. 3 at 10:01 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

hey i just actually read it again for what it is and not as my stupid attempt at poetry before I liked poetry, and I actually kinda relate! i didn't see that comeing.

on Jun. 3 at 9:06 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

thanks again!
around the time i wrote this I met first on the forums and we roleplayed together. apparently it was to hard to read so my writing is normal, even in poetry

WolfGurl GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 at 11:29 am
WolfGurl GOLD, Classified, Indiana
14 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

Like it! And I actually think getting rid of the "I"s is kinda poetic and artistic. Nice.

on Mar. 19 at 9:40 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 913 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

nope, i cant.

on Mar. 18 at 7:21 pm
FirstSteps5000 BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
4 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you reach for the stars, you'll just get the stars. Reach for the heavens and you'll get the stars thrown in." - unknown
"These aren't just stories,"... …"They're whole kingdoms. They're worlds. They're perspectives and opinions you can't offer, from lives you haven't lived." - The Isle of the Lost
"When someone does something hurtful, they have to admit it... [t]hen they have to be punished for it. And maybe then, if they apologize and change, maybe -maybe- *then* they get forgiven." - The One and Only Bob

Hey Sparrow! Nice poem! Idk if it lets you edit after it is posted, but if so, you might want to consider fixing the places where there is a "y" instead of an "i". Other than that, it's awesome!