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I Smile to Disquise

May 28, 2009
By VisionTru PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
VisionTru PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
41 articles 6 photos 28 comments

The bruises on the outside isn't as half as bad as the bruises on the inside.
The hits the punches the bad words, will never come as close as the hurt and pain of my heart.

my tears only signifies a little of the hurt.
My hwords ony try to hide the pain.
My smile is only a disquise on the face of one who truely hates another person.
I will never forget the day i looked into the eyes, dark as midnight, of the monster of my hurt.
Either it's unintentional
or intentional
I will never look at you the same way again.
I will never speak to you the same way.
The words that will come from my mouth into your ears are only the pity words i have to give to you.
You will never be able to push you way back into my heart, because you have finally lost all my respect and love.
Karma is just around the corner.
And just like my love for you, In my eyes your lost forever.

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This article has 5 comments.

on Jun. 9 2009 at 1:06 pm
VisionTru PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
41 articles 6 photos 28 comments
sorry about the typos.

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 5:43 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Wow, i am loving this. its amazing. but sad. keep writing. =]

on Jun. 7 2009 at 6:00 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Its sad that the greatest poems come from the greatest pain. This is amazing...and it makes me question the truth behind my smiles.

on Jun. 7 2009 at 4:29 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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I really like this poem; it was a great read (: but i think the weakest line was the karma one, and i suggest you proofread before you publish but the poem itself is great, great, great (:

on Jun. 5 2009 at 5:02 pm
carriebearieforever GOLD, Mcallen, Texas
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thats very very good. i like the whole last line((: