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April 26, 2009
By BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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Sometimes the day is so slow,
but the hurt last for so long.
Sometimes I don't know where to go
and other times I'm just moving along
Then that's when I wake up to see another day, but I still have that sad face I had yesterday.
So now my body is drained; I've cried my heart out and I've endured so much pain.
Wishing you were next to me at night.
So we can wake up in each others lives.
Then I ask why,
even though the reason is in my cry.
My eyes are natural disasters that carry out floods.
I can't help but to love you, it's in my blood.
Despite that, the pain, the pain is so powerful.
But I guess my heart is just another broken obstacle.

The author's comments:
Well this is another love poem, but this time someone hurt me. With this poem I explain how it feels to be with out someone you've loved, because they've decided to cheat on you. I hope you enjoyed it=]

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on Dec. 9 2009 at 6:58 am
Arluanna PLATINUM, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Mwahahahahaha! Now you are mine, Lesley-Bird, finally, at last, in my... oh, drat, forgot it had wings...”

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This speaks so loudly, you'd have to try hard not to get noticed. Loved it!

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 3:55 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Very, very nice. I really enjoyed this piece.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 7:54 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
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this... this is amazing. i can relate so much to this. you litterally put my feelings into words.