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Death Trap

June 2, 2009
By VisionTru PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
VisionTru PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
41 articles 6 photos 28 comments

I feel Trapped in this death hole
and the walls are closing in
The walls are an ugly color of beige
and the windows are surrounded by a white trim
I can see my destination on the outside
I can literally feel the warm breeze on my skin
i can feel the sun shining down on me
But thinking about it is like committing a sin
i'm stuck here for eternity
Every night i pray that this is my last night
and that there will be no more of me.
In the morning i open my eyes to find i'm still alive
With my dreams on the outside
And me dying Slowly on the inside.

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on Jun. 16 2009 at 12:15 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Wow! truly...amazing. The subject of this piece creates a great mood. It is...amazing. I love it!


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