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Seeing you (and her)

June 18, 2009
By nachos_loving_dork SILVER, New Hyde Park, New York
nachos_loving_dork SILVER, New Hyde Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Passion isn't the key to success. It does not guarantee greatness. It simply keeps you sane while you work your butt off.

Inside this poem is something that I want hidden. The dream will never hide from you. In this poem, I hide the message is dying to let ooze out to your palms.

My own infatuation has pushed me before. But you make fall to the edge. As I fall you hold her hand. Can't you see me falling? Can you see me at all?

A thousand nerves of thoughts of you connect ot my brain. images of you (and her) flow through my system like a river. I bleed the images on you everytime that I fall. You make me fall. You don't even have to try.

I'm in my thoughts far from the reality of youself. I have my head in the clouds that surround me from the truth. The truth is that your head is not in the clouds with me. It's with her on earth.

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on Nov. 26 2009 at 10:14 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow! this is a really good poem. it's very well written and it flows beautifully. i like the emotion in the poem, very heartwrenching. :) i like it a lot! check out some of my work if you could, id love your opinion. keep writing! :) :)