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His Lies

June 28, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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He said he loved me,
He said he cared.
He said he'd hold me,
When I got scared.
He said he'd be there, by my side,
through good or bad or any time.
He claimed I was his entire world,
his one and only girl.
His light in all the darkness.
I was more than just his girl,
He claimed I was a part of him.
He said he'd never leave me.
Never leave me sad and broken.
And I really thought he meant those three words spoken.
He said he'd never hurt me,
never make me cry.
As it turns out,
all he ever did was lie.

The author's comments:
This poem was inspired not by my own life expierience, but that of one of my close friends.

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on Jul. 7 2009 at 2:14 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

So, so true. I have experianced this countless times, so heartbreaking. I really like your poem. The rhymes are spectacular.

summerenee said...
on Jul. 6 2009 at 3:38 am
omg i have a poem just like this one called he lied its about my friend to its in this website check it out