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June 30, 2009
By brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die
music makes everything better

HE makes me laugh he makes me cry,
Sometimes I wish Icould die.

I flirt with him he flirts back at me,I wanna die for eternaty.

We flirted feircely and now its at an end,but I'll still be a true friend.

Sometimes you win sometimes you lose,It will make you want booze

But I'll stay sober for he and myself ,I shoot me before I push him off the shelf

I'll stay though he may never come around, In the rain I'll be lying on the ground

The rain makes me feel safe powerful and alone he makes me want to whisper,shout,and groan

He says he will never marry me,
I feel like running ,and drowning in the sea,

I,I wanna die I feel like I'm going to cry.

The author's comments:
This poem is about a boy named Caleb I felt soo hopeless

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on Jun. 16 2010 at 8:17 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

this poem is great!!! i love it sooooo much!!!! please check out some of my work (i think i already asked on one of your other awesome poems!!!)

on Jul. 12 2009 at 8:54 pm
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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I just wanted to thank you in the best way I know how, reading some of YOUR poems =) thanks so much for all the ones you left on my page

I really like your poem, I think we do have some of the same writing techniques! Keep it up!

on Jul. 9 2009 at 3:22 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

WOW. reading this I feel like it was happening to me. You did a incredible job. Read my poem called "Why War". I really like this poem. 1 more thing I have to say It was better then O-Kay.