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You Are Me

June 30, 2009
By brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die
music makes everything better

Lay your head on my chest,
Dry your eyes you did your best,
When you cry tears come falling from my eyes,
When you talk I speak
When your pale ,I'm weak

Lay your head on my chest,
Stop the tears and just rest
When you turn blue , I can't breath
When your upset I'm mad
When your happy I'm glad

Lay your head on my chest
This isn't a crying test
When you look I see
when you look at me I see you are me.

The author's comments:
This was a really odd poem I wrote it is very weird

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This article has 3 comments.

on Jun. 16 2010 at 8:13 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

GREAT JOB!!! awesome!!! i love this!!! pleas check out some of my work!! i think you would like it

on Jul. 11 2009 at 4:35 pm
xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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Great poem, it really says a lot in just a few lines.

on Jul. 9 2009 at 3:14 pm
cmoney1994 PLATINUM, Newark, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the best you an be as you can see i try to be by writing poetry.

This was amazing. You are a fantastic poet. I like how you compare you to this other person and then give the conclusion at the last sentence. PERFECT JOB. Check out my poem called "I am Here"