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The Prophecy

August 13, 2009
By Anyalisse PLATINUM, Gering, Nebraska
Anyalisse PLATINUM, Gering, Nebraska
37 articles 7 photos 11 comments

When blood stains the Queen of night,
And all mortals quake and quiver at Her sight,
When Those who seek to own the Spirit,
Tremble in justly fear of It,
When the Violet Alpha howls,
And once again prowls,
The Seven Tails shall awaken,
The Children no longer forsaken.
A Mother reborn.
Her Child scorned.
All Children harken to Her sound,
But whose blood shall stain the ground?

The author's comments:
This is an actual prophecy in a book I'm writing. I wanted to know what everyone thought of it and if it was any good. So here it is. i am actaully rather proud of it.

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on May. 20 2010 at 10:35 am
Anyalisse PLATINUM, Gering, Nebraska
37 articles 7 photos 11 comments

I'll go ahead an explain it just for you if that's ok if it isn't then don't read on.

What is the one thing that rules over night? Most people would think darkness but no darkness can be defeated but by what? what defeats darkness. Light. So the queen of night is? The moon.

Blood on the moon or a red moon in folklore and legend usually signifies death or a war.

All mortals quake and quiver at her sight. Well who among the mortal world wouldn't fear something out of the ordinary?

Those who seek to own the spirit. Who wants to own this spirit and why? Well why else would anoyone want anything these days. For power. But they are afraid of it and rightly so because people fear what is more powerful than them.

Violet alpha once again prowls refers to a specific trait of a great leader that will rise up and call to everyone else.

The Seven Tails is my own creation. The Seven Tailed wolf godess Artemis.

The childrem no longer forsaken. She's been asleep so her children were left to fend for themselves.

A mother reborn. Pretty self explanitory.

Her child scorned. Her children have been opressed and hunted for years.

All children harken to her sound. Here's the clincher in the story. ALL children come when she calls. Can you guess who all of her children are?

But whose blood shall stain the ground? Meaning whoever was foreseeing this was not able to finish and could not see the end of a great battle. In other words who the heck wins?

One more question for you to help you figure out who Artemis's children are. What are the creatures most often associated with the moon and what revelance do they play to this story?

If you guessed that then can you guess who her other children are?

Just tell me if you can't :)

Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2009 at 4:48 am
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
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This is pretty cool... I don't really get it, but I don't think it's meant to be understood (am I right? haha). Anyways, you should be proud of it! This is awesome :)