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Here By the Window

August 18, 2009
By Sunshine247 BRONZE, La Center, Washington
Sunshine247 BRONZE, La Center, Washington
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Here I sit by the window,
I don't know what for.
if I sit here long enough,
my prince will come walzing by.
His armor will shine in the sunlight,
my smile grows wider,
and he'll stop by this window,
my window,
he'll take off his helmet,
his mask of disguise,
gaze straight through my eyes,
to my heart,
through the dusty, old glass.
Smiling, he'll pull up a rose,
its red beauty calling my name.
For the longest time,
we just stare at each other,
not moving an inch,
After one more second of looking my direction,
he places the rose on the ground,
and walks away,
never to be seen again.
Maybe next time,
I should open the window.

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on May. 19 2010 at 2:41 pm
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

wow love it greatly put together!!! oh and i LOVED the end!!!!!

under kirby~bug would u look at my work?? i have one published now and on the site but nones commented!!!:( and if you keep checkin in maybe my others will come out to.

anyways great job God certainly gave you talent

CarlyG GOLD said...
on May. 19 2010 at 2:39 pm
CarlyG GOLD, Emmaus, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do." H. Jackson Brown Jr.

Very nice! I really like the idea that you threw into this poem. Also, the format was very creative.

wiltedrose said...
on Aug. 31 2009 at 3:30 pm
hahaha LOVE the ending! so great :D

on Aug. 26 2009 at 1:08 am
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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OHHHH this is so awesome. I want to say AMAZING but Inkspired took my word out of my mouth, or keyboard. Whatever.


on Aug. 25 2009 at 6:58 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

cute!! i loved this the minute i started reading it becasue you pulled me in. each sentence got better and better :) so sweet, and the ending is very good :) great poem! check out and comment/rate some of my work, i love the feedback. oh and this one is 4 stars :)

on Aug. 25 2009 at 3:58 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

AMAZING! I love this poem so much! The ending is funny and deep at the same time! Beautiful!