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Special Kiss

September 11, 2009
By ToBeMe BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
ToBeMe BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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I lick my lips trying to savor the taste
My hands softly caressing your beautiful face
Eyes bored into one another, our breathing is held
The look in your eyes is something mysterious, I cannot tell
Your hands are tightly wrapped around my waist not letting me go
Our heads coming together so, very, slow,
You chocolate iris wonder from my eyes to my mouth
Us only being focused on this moment we share right now
I feel your right hand leave my waist and tangle in my hair
Knowing that *this* will be different since we both really do care
Tilting you head, you pull me closer, our hearts pounding in synchronize
Your mouth being my morphine making me oh so high
I slightly part my lips and I feel yours on mines
Closing my eye I drown in your taste losing track of time
Tracing my fingers along you jaw line, you hand at my chin
Thinking of you always and forever, I am in love with my own sins
Braking away gently we breath heavily and deep
Our bodies close together, our heart making one beat
His hand never left my waist as we move to the couch to stay
"What's wrong?" his angelic voice whispered
And I said, "You take my breath away."

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on Oct. 3 2009 at 7:21 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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huh. well, i dont get it. its a beautiful poem...but i must just be a reaaaallly bad kisser, cause it never works out that way for me.... me adn my boyfriend always end up just cracking up inot each others mouths at how bad we are at it....

hmm. i like the poem. i think im just a dissfunctional kisser.

on Oct. 2 2009 at 6:57 pm
JaquambiaC. BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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wow this is really qood i cant relate so much !

on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:29 am

Angel44 SILVER said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 10:11 pm
Angel44 SILVER, Mesa, Arizona
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Love it!!!!

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on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:18 pm
asdfa asdfa, Asdfa, Virginia
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I love this poem so much...it sounds so much like me and my boyfriend like exactly because he always lifts up my chin and i always lick my lips (he loves that) and whenever we are close we breath really heavy. :) i showed him the poem to and he loved it :D keep up the good work

sarshannie said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 11:09 am
i love your poem it is very descriptive. and i think taht your feeling are expressed through this poem

on Sep. 30 2009 at 9:50 am
Christian-Herrmann ! BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
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GOOD POEM! :) (hope you parents dont see it though)

on Sep. 29 2009 at 1:34 pm
wonderful poem very disscriptive. i love it!!!wonderful

Violeh BRONZE said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 12:17 am
Violeh BRONZE, Tempe, Arizona
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Aww i love it!

descriptive! goood :)