Kiwi/Desert | Teen Ink


October 8, 2009
By Mia K. BRONZE, Jericho, New York
Mia K. BRONZE, Jericho, New York
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On the desert
You watch a man
Riding a huge
Two humped camel.

Near the desert,
There is a large field of grass,
With some huge brown mountains
And some tiny yellow ones.

And, in that field,
There is a swing set
Which really represents…
A big brown scar.

It is the color who would see
On a military uniform,
And the size
Of a little newborn baby.

The kiwi is mushy,
Yet its coat is ruff,
Because of the tiny yellow dots
And the huge brown ones that roam around it.

The author's comments:
It's a kiwi being metaphorically described as a desert.

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