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wild comfort

September 18, 2010
By cookie_monsta BRONZE, Santa Rosa, California
cookie_monsta BRONZE, Santa Rosa, California
4 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is a hobby not a requirement to me

I walk tiredly to my mother tree stump
as she wraps her arms around me
and shields me from the world
she loves me withe her heart
and I sleep into her

the sun wakes me gently
brushing back my hair
I smile and he smiles back
just as brightly

the mud covers my feet as I run
the mud runs with me
its in front of me, in the back
and the sides surround me

I breath in life and out
failure, where I am from there is
even the dark is my friend
hiding me from the real world

I'm safe by the wild
comfort of home

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on Dec. 4 2010 at 7:06 pm
sweetly_broken GOLD, Garner, North Carolina
15 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
We never know how big we are until we are asked to rise.

this is great, especially the irony and imagery. the last four stanzas were worded kind of oddly, and there was one typo, "I Breathe and out failure . . ." but the first two stanzas were perfect. the second stanza was my favorite. good job, keep writing!

~ Kirby