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Gone Cold

September 12, 2011
By riouxa SILVER, Granville, Ohio
riouxa SILVER, Granville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
If a man believes he's free, then there's no escape possible"

Too Cold
Dear (blank),
Although we’ve had many ups and downs,
I just can’t take the path we are headed now.
Your iciness towards me makes me quake,
And your yelling causes me heart ache.
There are so many issues we have to plow through
I swear it’s not me, it’s you.
Your face sends shivers down my spine
Even when we’re way up in the alpine.
Our relationship has gone cold,
This act we put on is getting old.
Hopefully you get the message I’m trying to send
Because next winter, I’m going to Florida instead.

The author's comments:
I had to write a break up poem for class that compared to something, I compared mine to winter. Hope you like it :)

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