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Close your eyes and live in the world of what if

March 23, 2012
By Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I loved you once, I love you still, I always have, and I always will!"

What if we lived in a world where the world all alien, or where people weren’t afraid to speak their minds. What if people never knew the word hate? What if love didn’t discriminate? What would happen if the kid in the corner wasn’t a freak and people weren’t afraid to peak? What if kids never had to go home wondering when their food would be there so they might eat. What if love wasn’t used for everything, like on food or a friend? How would people feel if they didn’t have a place to call home, and people didn’t have to be alone? Do you think the world would end if everyone made a new friend? If everyone was nice how people suffice? The answer to that is they can’t anyone can be nice 110 percent of the time and to absolutely every one. It just can’t be done in today’s world. Because of some boy or some girl. What if we all hand someone to count on to be strong? The fact is that we don’t. We are lost with no hope. That is how the world is to day all hate no play no love no say in what goes on in life. Tough love there’s no fight!

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Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2012 at 11:10 am
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Some parts of it were a little choppy, but I got the message. The rhyming within the sentences was good, too. The world isn't all hate, either, but I can see where you are coming from; it would be so different if EVERYONE cared about everyone else. Good Job!

Dark-Ninja said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 5:37 pm

on Mar. 31 2012 at 2:37 pm
Mike6546 SILVER, North Carolina, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
those who mind don\'t matter and those who matter don\'t mind

Pretty good, tough to read but I get the message.  

on Mar. 28 2012 at 2:24 pm
SleepingDragon58, Groose Pointe, Michigan
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I liked it everyone can't love 110 pecent but maybe someday


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on Mar. 28 2012 at 11:28 am
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Pretty negative but I see your point of view. I feel like this sometimes and it's frustrating. Overall well phrased and relatable