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The Crimson Crave:

May 26, 2012
By Happymask PLATINUM, Pride, Louisiana
Happymask PLATINUM, Pride, Louisiana
22 articles 3 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have great faith in fools, self-confidence my friends call it." - Edgar Allan Poe

When vitals crave of blood
I hunger for the sun
I thirst it's crimson crown
And cry a hopeless flood
Oh Eon, are you he?
True love behind a veil?
Or war to no avail?
View all you've made of me
I linger and I wail
And also, I sail
Onward to the shore
Again, forlorn I see
Ev'ry wave and I plea
Oh make me sail nomore

The author's comments:
Ev'ry: every.

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on Feb. 25 2013 at 5:41 pm
Angel-freed PLATINUM, Dallas City, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Love is our true meaning, so show it. Don't be sad because its over, be happy because it happened. -Dr. Seuss; "Pooh will we be friends forever?" asked Piglet, "Even longer." Pooh replied. -Winnie the Pooh

Amazing!! :)    

on Jun. 23 2012 at 9:21 am
satellite23 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prove it.

I like it, has a very old feeling to Lord of the Rings-ish LOL


But seriously, very good.