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I dreamed.....

July 31, 2012
By dustypoet BRONZE, West Fork, Arkansas
dustypoet BRONZE, West Fork, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
What torments of pain you endured from evils that never arrived.-Emerson

I dreamed a broken rainbow
Crying fire, grime, and need
Hailed the flustered ocean
With a proud fountain of green
The sea with her haughty countenance
Took that green and wore it well
A mantle of sparkling emeralds
Above her dress of shimmering pearls

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2012 at 2:31 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I like this! Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot :) Thanks!

on Sep. 8 2012 at 3:50 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

i've read all your poems and you write well, and i admire the words you use and your construction. however, i do not get the message you are trying you cnvey, both in this poem and tombstones. perhaps you should try writing with a better idea in mind, and briing out that message with the powerful writing skills you have, that would make a brilliantly explosive combination. keep going!