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emotional objects

June 19, 2014
By Emayen_Laweit_Ryuzaki SILVER, Denver, Colorado
Emayen_Laweit_Ryuzaki SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
The first to apologize is the bravest. The first to forgive is the strongest. The first to forget is the happiest. - unknown
no matter how gifted you are you alone can not change the world... but that's what makes it so special. - L


haunted by the tv of confusion
I'm leaving behind the backpack of anxiety
turning off the ACE of truma
the blanket of loneliness never helped me keep warm.
taking off the sweater of stress
I'm gonna lay on the roof of happiness all day.


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I had a good time writing this

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on Jul. 7 2014 at 1:04 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This si great, I especially liked the metaphors! XD

on Jun. 25 2014 at 3:18 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

I love how this is so simple- and yet it feels as if there is something behind it all that makes it very complex. It has a random childlike tone, but it's told with such maturity that you can tell that it has a deeper meaning.   I  like it. good job.   P.S. would you mind checking out some of my newer poems? I'd love your feedback. Thanks!

on Jun. 20 2014 at 9:04 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Also, I've needed to do what you wrote in your poem. It's simple, but powerful to me. 

on Jun. 20 2014 at 9:02 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Hey, I really liked it! I can't believe no-one has commented on it yet. This is great. Thank you, for sharing this.