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Our Forever

December 24, 2008
By WriterDancerLover GOLD, Fontana, California
WriterDancerLover GOLD, Fontana, California
15 articles 1 photo 25 comments

You,
my beautiful sight,
my dream.
Finally, the wait is
over.

Amazing,
you and I.
Our Music,
our song,
the impression it leaves.
It never fails.

Our second chance,
we deserve
a great life
together.
It scared us in the past,
but now our time
is never up.

Here we fly,
arm in arm,
don't let go-
Forever


The author's comments:
I wrote this for my English class! I hope you like it!

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on Feb. 8 2010 at 8:31 am
ThunderLovestheRain SILVER, Brookhaven, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't fret when it rains on your parade...just learn to dance in it."

"Be yourself...everyone else is already taken."

"Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes."

I love it I love it I love it!!!

on Jul. 23 2009 at 11:18 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

That was beautiful....You have such tatent...WRITE MORE!!!!

on May. 15 2009 at 8:38 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I love this poem! Little by little, you show what you're talking about. Great!!

Swingin'Me! said...
on Feb. 14 2009 at 5:52 am
hi myself i'm so bored! =p