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She breathes

January 8, 2009
By foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM, Redmond, Washington
foreverdreaming14 PLATINUM, Redmond, Washington
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Cupping fire in her palms,
She gasps and breathes,
Inhales the smoke,
Crackling, burning, dying at the edges,
She half smiles and says it feels good.

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on Dec. 14 2009 at 8:49 pm
wishing4thebest2day GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving will ultimately make you happier in life. It is rewarding for you to brighten up someone's day." -Anonymous

Wow. It makes me think...

snoble said...
on Apr. 5 2009 at 3:45 am
wow that was incredably deep for just a few lines...

you are a really good writer

someday931 said...
on Jan. 22 2009 at 4:38 am
Your a really good writer