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Love Song

March 31, 2009
By Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

With wonders mind firmly oversinned

Thy way ye finds, meets love's true end

Yet if thy's song brings night's day or night's fall

Then surely lover's lane isn't for lovers at all

Darkest times ye spent for knowledge or control

To bring back thou a bit of such a sunken soul

And if ye not bother, with such a summer's pace

I know thou wilt find love's true face

An eternity full of such gracefullness

Thou knocks and knocks for one small kiss

Borrowed time for two so slowly spent

Gives just enough room for fate to be bent

Keep open sights so love doesn't slip by

And never stop the star without least a try

But especially with minutes so easily forgotten

Let thy mind not slip, slip to the bottom

The author's comments:
This is a poem I wrote as a project for my class; It is my own renaissance style interpretation of Tesla's "Love Song"

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This article has 3 comments.

on Apr. 13 2009 at 2:10 am
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

wow1 Shakespeare would have been extremely proud

on Apr. 11 2009 at 11:33 pm
Estelle_Star SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emtions," James A. Michener.

I always loved the renaissance time and this poem is very well done. I really like it and it is very poetic.

on Apr. 10 2009 at 5:10 pm
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
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great job!!!!