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My Marvin

October 21, 2009
By RiiNa BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
RiiNa BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's too short to be pissed off all the time." American HIstory X

I need you in my life,
more than you will ever know. You've given me a love-
a love, I pray, will grow.

Your smile gives me hope
for a life of happiness.
Just wrap your arms around me, that's when I truly feel blessed.

The way your lips caress me,
with compassion and desire,
fills my heart with joy
and lights my soul with fire.
I’ll love you with all I have
and NEVER any less.
That’s my promise to you:
to give you my very best.

I love you Marvin.

The author's comments:
My boyfriend inspired me.
Honestly I'm a beginner at writing and I would appreciate any help. I'm not good at much and poetry is the only thing I'm close to being good at. Any advice or comments are welcomed but please be kind! Like i said I am a beginner.

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This article has 3 comments.

ConnerH SILVER said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 9:39 pm
ConnerH SILVER, Ridgefield, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Even castles made of sand drift into the sea, eventually." James Marshall Hendrix


I love your style :)

on Nov. 1 2009 at 9:29 am
Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
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This is really nice. Keep writing, you have a spark for it!

on Oct. 28 2009 at 5:51 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow. i read this before reading your comments about the article and i never would have guessed that you are a beginning poet :) this is a great piece! it has nice rhythm and flow to it, and you wrote about things very sweet to you; i can almost feel the emotion :) overall it's a great piece. check out some of my work if you ever need any help (you could saw im a veteran writer) :D good luck with your writing, im looking forward to more of your work :)

<3 dreamer