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Emotion's Sea

April 14, 2010
By Coldfire SILVER, Hammond, Louisiana
Coldfire SILVER, Hammond, Louisiana
8 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're too young to know that certain things are impossible, so we do them anyway." - William Penn

Pity's echo say no more
Of torment o'er our lives so poor
Might we go down here forthwith
And undertake this dark day's myth?

In fear we plead, yet all is lost
Like weakened sailors tempest-tossed
For comfort now we may well plea
For saving from emotion's sea

Though dark and dense is our despair
And hurt proceeds beyond repair
I charge you here gaze on the Light
Perfection giving rays of right

The author's comments:
A message to all who feel like all is lost, there is hope. Chin up!

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Sid_C-W BRONZE said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 4:02 pm
Sid_C-W BRONZE, Whitestown, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you do the right thing, people won't be sure you've done anything at all." -Billy West

Your very good at expressing things artisticly. I wish I could write poems like that.