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Wouldn't it be beautiful (if you believed it?)

December 25, 2010
By SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If fairies and pixie dust
Could make you fly?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If happy endings emerged
Out of fairy tales?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If knights in shining armor
Really came to the rescue?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If Santa Clause brought presents
On every Christmas Eve?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If perfect was a thing that
Could really be achieved?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If love could be

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If you believed it?

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on Mar. 22 2012 at 1:09 pm
Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
You can wish apon a star, but only you can make the dream come true.

You dont need boys, boys need you.

I love the poem. You should read, rate and comment on them.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:17 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
1 article 0 photos 629 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Santa Claus DOSEN'T deliver presents on Christmas Eve?????????? I REFUSE TO BELIEVE THAT!!!!(Nah, Im joking.)

This is a very beautifly poem. You know, It just occered to me that some of those things could be possible if we believed they were, perfection(in somethings), unending love, Knights in shining armor (as long as we don't literally expect armor). It really gave me food for thought. Great job.

bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:25 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

i cried when i read this! very nice.

on Mar. 11 2011 at 7:42 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I love this!!!  The questions that you incorperated were truely amazing.

on Feb. 16 2011 at 10:51 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:)))) i loved the beginning especially... though i think u coulda ended this differently somehow, but still, it was nice! the whole thing was pretty ^^

Coffee BRONZE said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:39 pm
Coffee BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
4 articles 5 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your Face.

I think this is my favorite of your poems. It's good. :):) 5 stars

on Feb. 16 2011 at 3:13 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i like the question at the end of each verse, it makes it more personal i think. I only have one thing i didn't really like and that was at the end instead of ''If you believed it'' i think it could be better if it was just ''if you believed'' but thats your deicison and its really good anyway!! :)