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The Night Sky

April 4, 2013
By ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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Favorite Quote:

The night is just beginning,
And soon the stars will shine,
And the moon will beam his big round face
On this little one of mine.

The heavens will come alive with lights
And I'll stand here in a daze,
Under the twinkling eyes of stars
And beneath the bright moon's gaze.

The moon above will softly smile,
A giant cream white pearl,
His halo creating an ice blue glow,
Silent and bright like a mural.

The stars will sing a song of cheer;
Of happiness and peace,
And as I sit there beneath the sky
I'll soon be lulled to sleep.

I'll be swallowed up in dreamy thoughts;
Into paradise I'll fly,
I'll sleep among the heavenly beings,
Then wake up beneath the night sky.

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Cam_is_Away said...
on Apr. 9 2016 at 9:47 pm
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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I love this one. One of my favorites of yours ^v^

on Apr. 21 2013 at 7:38 pm
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

In the words of a very wise child I know, "*Starry eyed* PREEEETTTYYYY" The flow matched the tone perfectly. I applaud the for that. Only thing I'd add there is a single-syllable adjective (or two at the most) right before the last "night sky" to add a cherry on top of this delectable dessert. Such a nice scene here and lovely presentation ^_^