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My Sinful Heaven

October 27, 2015
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Blazing hotter than fire,
Yet you're colder than snow
You call yourself a liar,
Your truth, no one knows.

She pulls you to the ground
With that love she possess.
And as harsh as it sounds,
It's something I must confess.

She's like the devil inside
Who has control of my sins;
But when she opens wide,
She has an angel within.

And I go home everyday
To call the lord up-above.
I sit on my knees and pray
About a word we call love.

For as hot as she blaze.
Her love is like coals-
It's fire goes for days
But it always turns cold.

The author's comments:

This ballad is mostly about a man who thinks he falls in love with the devil and he wants to get out of it but he always stays in his relationship. Once again, I do not have any relationship or experienced love but I understand it. Enjoy.

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This article has 4 comments.

Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2015 at 11:21 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

Something so complicated, yet is so beautiful, who can truly understand it? I love how you have no experience, yet you turn it into some sort of clay that just makes you question whether to think about it or just enjoy it. (Sorry, I ramble a bit.)

on Dec. 9 2015 at 8:51 pm
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
47 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never judge a book you've never read!

thats beautiful good work!

on Dec. 9 2015 at 12:35 am
LinaBlack PLATINUM, Marshalltown, Iowa
36 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
First they ignore you, then they laugh at you, then they fight you, then you win. - Gandhi

For only understanding love you did I good I think never been in love either.but I liked it

Sonder said...
on Nov. 30 2015 at 2:30 am
Sonder, Wattpad, Other
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Beautiful. Love is indeed complicated, I liked how you still wrote about love even without experience. My favorite stanza is the third. Keep up the swell work! ^_^