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Shake the Disease

December 18, 2015
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

And you, looking fragile,
With your red hair and smile.
We kiss for only a little while,
But this love travels for miles.

Oh girl, please please please,
For I am down on my knees.
Help me shake this disease.
That you always seem to tease.

For I know now, this love of ours,
Will leave us broken with scars,
This love of yours puts be in bars
So I can only look at the stars.

So girl, please take me home tonight.
Cause I want to see some light.
Cause I don't want to do another fight,
Anymore, tonight.

Oh girl, take me anywhere,
I don't care, I don't care, I don't care.
Take me away from your hair
And your seductive stare.

Please girl help me get rid of
This disease called love.
So please, let me go up-above,
Release me like a dove.

The author's comments:

Once again, since I haven't stated this recently, I have never been in a relationship of have been in love but I do understand it. This poem is about a guy who is stressed about his relationship so he just wants to be over with it.

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Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2016 at 9:30 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

Is it strange that I read this like a song? Its an amazing song, how do you understand love like this having not been in it?