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Please Don't Go

February 13, 2016
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Brother, please don't go.
I want to be with you.
I want to relive the memories we had.
I want to relive the memories that were sad.
I want these feelings to be true.

Brother, please don't go.
Mother will miss you so bad.
I can't see from my eyes,
The tears cover them as I cry.
All I can feel is sad.

Brother, please don't go.
Don't leave me alone.
I want to see you again.
Feel your hair and skin.
Since you had gone.

Brother, don't leave so soon.
I miss lying with you in bed.
I want to hear you laugh once more
I don't want to be alone anymore.
I want to cry with you instead.

Brother, please come back.
Come back, for me one more time.
All I can do is cry, I don't want to.
But I just want to be with you.
Please come back one last time.

The author's comments:

So for my 50th article (since I do stories now I am including them) I wanted to write for my brother since his birthday was in Febuary, which happened to be this month, and I wanted to do something for him. I put in raw feelings in here for him because I have been thinking about it for a while. Enjoy.

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Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 16 2016 at 11:08 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
3 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

From the heart. I can seriously relate with this poem.

on Feb. 24 2016 at 3:30 pm
AWriter101 SILVER, Rockton, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
being single doesn't mean you are week it means that you are strong enough to wait for what you deserve! -Niall Horan

I feel sad reading this, but I am happy that I did, its is wonderful