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Intense

April 7, 2021
By manvi_yaduvanshi23 BRONZE, India, Other
manvi_yaduvanshi23 BRONZE, India, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love more to get back even more. Just it"
~Me


When I sleep those dreams play upside down

Those dreams which I think are intense. 

Filled with uncanny wonders

They are freakish,  They are intense. 

The squeaking ghosts, the morbid and dreadful things just make me petrified

‘Cause, they are ghoulish,  They are intense.

And when I wake up

They dissipate without a trace.  

They are really weird, filled with bizarre secrets we don’t know; and of course,

They are intense.


The author's comments:

This is my first ever submission of my writings to any magazines. I am a 17-year-old girl who lives in India. I do not write very often but this is one of the free-verse I penned down a few years ago.

I hope the editor likes it.


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on Apr. 22 at 10:44 pm
_nitin_mittal_, Patiala, Other
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Beautifully penned... great job....keep it up👍👍

on Apr. 22 at 10:44 pm
_nitin_mittal_, Patiala, Other
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Beautifully penned... great job....keep it up👍👍

on Apr. 22 at 10:44 pm
_nitin_mittal_, Patiala, Other
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Beautifully penned... great job....keep it up👍👍

on Apr. 22 at 6:42 am
manvi_yaduvanshi23 BRONZE, India, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love more to get back even more. Just it"
~Me

@Vani_1800 Thank you☺️

on Apr. 22 at 6:41 am
manvi_yaduvanshi23 BRONZE, India, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love more to get back even more. Just it"
~Me

@Yashika_2002 Thankyou ☺️

Diwakar_22 said...
on Apr. 21 at 3:48 am
Diwakar_22, India, Other
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The words beings mentioned explain the essence in a beautiful manner. Well written

Poornima_79 said...
on Apr. 21 at 3:43 am
Poornima_79, Bharatpur, Other
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Very nice use of English Vocab. Explains it even more.

Vani_1800 said...
on Apr. 21 at 3:35 am
Vani_1800, Abohar, Other
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Aesthetically written♥️

derek_ said...
on Apr. 21 at 1:40 am
derek_, India, Other
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The essence of the verse is quite catchy. Verse Construction is absolutely great!

divyansh_404 said...
on Apr. 21 at 1:26 am
divyansh_404, Jaipur, Other
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Great job! Really well written and I hope to see more of your writings in the future.

Yashika_2002 said...
on Apr. 20 at 2:51 pm
Yashika_2002, Alwar, Other
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Just loved it ! The intensity of the poem was very captivating !