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Snowfall

April 10, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 909 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."


Snowfall from below

Stare at weeping clouds above

Tiny flurries raining

Chilling ruddy face upturned

Smiling in the storm

Whistling wind freezes ears

Laughter mingles with

Roaring wind, whispering snow

Snowflake; lands on nose

Melts there, droplet hugging red

Rosy skin envelopes

Other snow blown away

Whistling, whispering cries

Fade into background


The author's comments:

k I've never written a haiku b4 don't judge. and yes, I'm breaking the rules. when have i ever followed them? (i mean society and artistic rules) not much fun following the rules. besides my big problem with haikus is that they're so short.

this is potentially about a rabbit.


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on Jun. 27 at 3:19 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 909 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

thanks!

Lydiaq DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 27 at 12:13 pm
Lydiaq DIAMOND, Somonauk, Illinois
96 articles 35 photos 649 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be a forest than a street.
If I only could, I surely would.
I'd rather feel the earth beneath my feet."

I love the illteration!