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Cold Heart

April 30, 2021
By WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
54 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Will I ever smile again?

Will the rain ever end?

Free me from my sadness,

Free me from my madness.

Pain tears me apart,

Pain stabs my heart.

Save me from this fate,

Before it's to late.

Wish upon a shooting star,

Wish to fly away.

Drown myself in song,

Or in a good book,

To forget about the world.

Will a smile return,

To warm my cold heart.


The author's comments:

This poem is about how life can bring you down and that some people are struggling to get a grip on themselves; how you can get down so low that it feels like nothing will ever get better. 


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on May. 7 at 2:50 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

regardless, it was good enough i favorited it

on May. 4 at 7:51 pm
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
54 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

And it was song in the side note but It was supposed to be poem

on May. 4 at 7:33 pm
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
54 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks for the advice! I like your work as well.

on May. 4 at 2:29 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 906 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

that was great!(i didnt read the sidenote)
btw if you keep up the rhymes it would be a limerick not free verse.