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Zing!

June 30, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 909 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."


zing!

the frying pan flew from her hand

ping!

it hit against the land

ring!

it came back like a boomerang

ow!

it hit her in the head with a bang.


The author's comments:

i wanted to write a funny poem. probably failed.


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on Jul. 14 at 10:40 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
159 articles 22 photos 909 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"
"I just switched 50 things to anonymus and it doesnt even make a diff- why was i writing this again? where was i? hm.... oh well."

i didnt know at the time(:

Lydiaq DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 14 at 10:06 pm
Lydiaq DIAMOND, Somonauk, Illinois
96 articles 35 photos 649 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be a forest than a street.
If I only could, I surely would.
I'd rather feel the earth beneath my feet."

You didn't fail. You got editor's choice, girl, for crying out loud.