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Oh girl

February 16, 2022
By Kaylabiggica GOLD, Greenlawn, New York
Kaylabiggica GOLD, Greenlawn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I desire the things that will destroy me in the end."- Sylvia Plath


Oh girl what made you so blue

You are not the girl that I once knew

The one that had that smile

The one that always looked so wild

What happened to your blithe

That is the part of you I miss

What happened to your light

I know that you put up a good fight

Oh girl who made you so blue?


The author's comments:

My name is Kayla I am 15 years old and currently a freshman in high school. I have always loved poetry and have been writing it for almost a year now. I wrote this poem about a girl who was once very happy and got herself into a toxic relationship and it had a huge toll on her life


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on Feb. 20 2022 at 9:26 am
Kaylabiggica GOLD, Greenlawn, New York
16 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I desire the things that will destroy me in the end."- Sylvia Plath

@Afra- Thank you so much!!!!

Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 19 2022 at 10:47 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

@Kaylabiggica, I love the anaphora in the poem...And I love how smoothly it flows...Nice work...👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻