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Leaving So Soon?

August 29, 2009
By Toxic_Wasteland PLATINUM, Andowver, New Jersey
Toxic_Wasteland PLATINUM, Andowver, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life... It Goes On."~Robet Frost

Friendship gone on for too long to let go, sense of humor never

Going to end, love in the hearts of younger ones, hope

In ones eyes, prays for the lower classmen

Mind set on a main goal, new chall-

Enges to face or to over

Come, trying so

Hard to

Become better and

Brighter, changing your old

Ways to new ones, looking for something

New to hold onto, never forgetting the past, so

Many memories shared, such precious time wasted on
Fights that were pointless anyway, smiles shared, cries heard

From far beyond, but wait what happened, did it all

Go by to fast for us to catch up, I’m gonna

Miss so much, I’m leaving a school

That has become my 2nd

Home, so much

Time has

Passed by my eyes

I won’t forget the loving faces

Because now I’m leaving maybe too soon

Am I leaving too soon, I’ll be back though but when will I be

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This article has 8 comments.

on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:34 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore

See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

this is so good so never change it & keep writing.

on Sep. 12 2009 at 11:05 am
AstericPetals SILVER, Framingham, Massachusetts
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Very interesting poem, great job.

I loved the lines: "Hard to

Become better and

Brighter, changing your old

Ways to new ones, looking for something

New to hold onto..."

That really struck me, and I feel like I can really relate to the emotion that you are conveying with this piece.

If you get a chance--please check out some of my work! I would love the feedback. :-]

on Sep. 11 2009 at 2:32 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Great! I like the emotion of the poem.

GageKing GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 6:38 pm
GageKing GOLD, Owatonna, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open. Sure, everybody wants to play God, but for me it's a full-time job. What you don't understand, you can make mean anything." Jeferree Star

This is a very good poem!! Good job:)

Requiem SILVER said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 9:00 pm
Requiem SILVER, McCall, Idaho
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I like this.

erikae GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 6:15 pm
erikae GOLD, Brookfield, Wisconsin
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I love your word choice, it flows great!

on Sep. 8 2009 at 2:29 pm
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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i love it :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 11:37 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is awesome just no tht it never to soon:)