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I Wish I Was Free

October 1, 2009
By ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
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I wish I was free
Free from Death
Free from Depression
But most imprtantly
Free from the world
I'm not meant to be kept in a cage
Or in a cell
And to be locked up
Or chained down
I was born to be free
To fly high in the sky
Not walk on earth
And be ruled unfairly by tyrants
But to fly
To feel the air through my hair
Adrenaline Pulsing through my veins
And sweet fresh air fill my lungs and nostrils
I want to be free from worries
Free from pain
Free from tears
And not care about anything
Except for freedom
I wish I was free
Oh, how I wish I was free

The author's comments:
I was bored in school so i wrote this poem... critize it.

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on May. 10 2010 at 4:21 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

I wish I was free too. but I couldn't say it like you did. you've already used up all the words. 5 stars.

on Oct. 13 2009 at 7:23 pm
LuckieMistake PLATINUM, Florence, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"What doesn't kill me only, will make me stronger in my head..." Papa Roach, Kick In The Teeth

this ones really good!

savina GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 6:41 pm
savina GOLD, Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" Dont try to bull crap a bull crapper becuase they know all about the bull crapping".- my ap enviromental science teacher

I agree with you, this poem is amazing. Thank you for commenting on my poem by the way