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The Evening

October 18, 2009
By nachos_loving_dork SILVER, New Hyde Park, New York
nachos_loving_dork SILVER, New Hyde Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Passion isn't the key to success. It does not guarantee greatness. It simply keeps you sane while you work your butt off.

The stars twinkle out
a melodic love song.
Moody clouds harmonize the shine
with a low, subtle hum.
New moon takes the stage
as a road runs out of miles to come.

Our night gives a new chapter.
The weak nights shiver inside us.
We're mingling the cold night away
as the pitch black streches on to the horizon.

The author's comments:
This is a poem that I have made based on Rainer Maria Rilke's poem "Evening Love Song."

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Kipitama said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:54 am
Kipitama, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Short and Sweet.