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October 22, 2009
By Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
Emanuella Reznik PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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I just want to cross you out in some medium kinda ink,
just for a while.
Set you on the windowsill of my thoughts and kind of accidentally flick you, lovingly, off the edge.
I'd make sure a blanket lay beneath you where you'd fall, gracefully, and think of what you did, of what you did.
You're such a conversationalist when I pick out just what you say.
But you say just what you want, and I guess that that's okay.
My imagination gave you some inches, ­unbitten nails, philosophical thoughts.
My imagination made a “II” of you, but it's not you.
I stretched you what way I chose, erased ­really well what I didn't think went.
I want to cross the “II” you out in some ­medium kinda ink.
I want to meet /you/ again.

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on Aug. 9 2011 at 2:22 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

'flick you lovingly off the edge' i LOVE that part! really good, excellent imagery, completely adore it! keep writing :D

on May. 5 2010 at 2:29 pm
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

Wow this is great. I want to do this too.