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Because I Can't Say Good-bye Anymore MAG

November 7, 2009
By TheGirlWhoCantBeMoved SILVER, Brandenburg, Kentucky
TheGirlWhoCantBeMoved SILVER, Brandenburg, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
There's always gonna be temptation, it's God's way of testing us. <3 Time isn't wasted on amazing people.

I think
that maybe
this is the
last time I
will have
the strength
to say “good-
bye” to you.
I think
that maybe
this time,
when you
leave me,
you'll have
to stay
g o n e.

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on Aug. 4 2013 at 3:05 pm
lauren_mcmicking SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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I love the simplicity of this poem. It's very relatable and the way you separate the letters of the last word because it is very affective. From a writer's point of view, that's the way it should be done. Simple. That's the way I write my poems but I get my point across. I love this!!

M. said...
on Aug. 4 2013 at 2:19 pm
I love this. Even though it is a very simple poem, it is one of the best ones I've read. It is very relatable because of how easy it is to go back to someone. I also like the way the letters are separate on the last word. Very affective.

on Apr. 23 2011 at 9:34 pm
Paige101 BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"It was the first time we ever played in Illinois, yet the 50-60 kids there were singing along to our tunes like they’d been fans all their lives." -A Day To Remember

I absolutely love this poem. It is one of my all time favorites. I swear I could read this everyday without getting tired of it. :) I'm rating this 5 stars. Keep up the good work!

freeday15 GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2011 at 2:49 pm
freeday15 GOLD, Paramus, New Jersey
18 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is Blind" i truly believe in this it is in all of my pieces, and if u read between the lines then u will find it there...

simple, love it

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on May. 28 2010 at 4:44 am
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

I like this...Very simple yet effective in getting your point across :)