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Blue Angel

January 10, 2010
By GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

I see a Blue Angel in the sky. He's watching over me up there. But he does not see Iam crying in tears for my feelings are hurt. But not even an angel, an Blue Angel in the sky can heel the sadness inside, for love has come but not to feel. The boy I love can only heel.

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on Apr. 30 2010 at 8:58 am
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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Wow this poem is o cute. I love the way you used 'heel'. If you have time please look at some of my poetry.

on Apr. 23 2010 at 8:16 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

that was awwesome!

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:18 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Wow I love the ending

It has a vry nice flow to it

on Mar. 15 2010 at 3:34 pm
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

I like your poem just you might want to fix heel to heal and just little typos like that. Besides, that I like it!

on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:17 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 430 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

I like the poem, all you need to do is fix the typos, plus, maybe put it in poetic lines, & it would be perfect. :)