Promise | Teen Ink


January 4, 2010
By writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

We've been friends forever
And realized that one day
I felt stronger about you
And that you felt the same way

So we started to date
We are now closer than ever
I want to lie here in your arms
and never move, never.

Now it's two years later
Everyone knows we'll last forever
And forever apearantly isn't coming soon enough.

You called me and I came
I was worried because you weren't in school.
You took my hand and we took a walk.
You wrap your sweatshirt around my shoulders as I shiver from the cold

As we reach our favorite spot
Fall leaves drifting down
You go down on my knee and ask me a question.

I want to say yes, I really truely do
But we're only 17
you know the conclussion people will jump to.
you stand adn whisper that all that matters is me and you.
I start to cry
Being torn in half.
It wasn't supposed ot be like this.
We walk back.

Its two weeks later
I twist the ring around my finger.
Ihe ring of a future promise.
A compromise

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on Apr. 1 2011 at 4:20 pm
Neon_Gypsy_Blood BRONZE, Idaho Falls, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Do or do not, there is no try.
~Master Yoda~

Its really good!! I like it a lot! I still cant figure out if its sad or happy! I think it might be both!

on May. 1 2010 at 11:21 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
11 articles 6 photos 51 comments

Hey guys! its me! the auther! i have a new screen name and new work so please comment on this and the the other ones i've posted! pleeeez!