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February 16, 2010
By kaileeboo BRONZE, Ravenna, Ohio
kaileeboo BRONZE, Ravenna, Ohio
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why did you do this
why now
what for
was there a good reason
what did you take
how many
where did you get them from
when will you stop
will you stop for me
what was the reason you started them
what good is going to come out of it
you said you were going to kill yourself
what's that going to solve
it wont solve anything it will make it worse
when you die it might solve it for you
what about the people that love you
what will they do
there is a lot of it that goes on an we don't
know how to deal with it
suicide won't help
now i am scared
that you will do it again
how many will you take
what will stop you
how long will i have to see you
what is it going to be this time
what's your limit
is there one
there are many ways to kill your self
i wish you wouldn't do this
now look your in the hospital
now we don't anything
we are scared that when you come out
you will kill your self
it is not fun to think about how you plan to kill yourself
when you told me you wanted to get hit by a train
that hurt like hell
i don't want you to do this
its not going to solve anything
dont do it
its not worth it there is other ways

The author's comments:
my best friend OD on pills and it close to home because i do pills and it hurts so don't do it there is no point trust me i have had a lot of stuff go on but don't.

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Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 8:35 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

i really really like the message, but i think you should edit the grammar a little bit but other than that htis poem is great! i love your writing... check out some of mine? thanks!!