Failed | Teen Ink


March 14, 2010
By FindingMe SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
FindingMe SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love...and be loved in return. (Moulin Rouge)

Days go by of my life
as I please my immortal father.
A life spent following His word.

In the sanctuary, vows led by His
mortal child make a marriage.
Children named after those in
my Bible are born.
We never miss a day of worship,
and I devote my life to Him.

Yet, He tests me, and I fail.
"You shall not lie with a male
as one lies with a female"

The author's comments:
I'm sorry if you find this piece offensive...but it's how I feel.

Similar Articles


This article has 1 comment.

on May. 2 2010 at 7:03 am
TanazMasaba GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 10 photos 214 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've gotta dance like there's nobody watching,
Love like you'll never be hurt,
Sing like there's nobody listening,
And live like it's Heaven on Earth."

---William W. Purkey

no way i dnt think its offensive or anything. Its hiow u feel and i believe dat people hav da right to speak deir mind. oh n thnax 4 reading my wrk n ya it ended quickly, but dats bcuz its a short story. Im taking it easy now n i'll post the first chap of da novel im workin on later. ur right, age dont matter when writing, but the thing is, no body wants to read the works of a 13 year old. The first thing they think is "Ok dis is going 2 be stupid cuz its done by a child" So thats why i feel pretty discouraged.  n u know wats worse? evry one expects me to do romance bcuz im a teen----ugh! why? im not romantic! all i write about is how i feel n wats my opinion. I like to write about things that make people think, the exact thing u did here. oh n sorry, i know i talk a lot.